Friday 8 August 2014

Boomwhacker lesson

n class we had a music lesson on how to play Boomwhackers. the teachers taught us good. I really liked that we got to dong people in the head with them. I found it tricky to do it. Next i would like to do it again

Tuesday 27 May 2014

Speech Topic

These are some facts that I researched for my speech.  I am doing my speech on Why I hate speaking in public.  
I found it a bit hard to find facts so Matua Faenza helped me.  Next I want to research facts without help.

Wednesday 12 March 2014

Sensory Garden Recount





Reflection on my Recount -
  • Underline where you think you are in your learning of the sensory recount.
  • Remember you are just assessing how well you described your surroundings, using descriptive words or poetic devices.

Extended Abstract
I can help someone else to suggest ways to improve their own sensory recount.

Relational
I can add a poetic device to make it more interesting e.g simile, metaphor or alliteration.

Multistructural
I can describe using more than 2 senses in my recount.

Unistructural
I can describe using at least 2 of my senses in my recount.

Pre-structural
I need help to find words to describe what I see, feel, touch, or hear.


I have put myself at multistructural stage because I can describe more than two senses in my recount.

My next learning step is to work on using different language features in mor writing to make my writing more better.

Thursday 13 February 2014

MY Welcome Post

My name is Javier. I go to Elm Park School. I have a blog because I can show people my learning. My interests are playing on my ps3 and pc games. I'm looking forward to seeing any comments you have.