Statistical Investigation

Sensory Garden Recount

Reflection on my Recount -

• Underline where you think you are in your learning of the sensory recount.
• Remember you are just assessing how well you described your surroundings, using descriptive words or poetic devices.

Extended Abstract	I can help someone else to suggest ways to improve their own sensory recount.
Relational	I can add a poetic device to make it more interesting e.g simile, metaphor or alliteration.
Multistructural	I can describe using more than 2 senses in my recount.
Unistructural	I can describe using at least 2 of my senses in my recount.
Pre-structural	I need help to find words to describe what I see, feel, touch, or hear.

I have put myself at multistructural stage because I can describe more than two senses in my recount.

My next learning step is to work on using different language features in mor writing to make my writing more better.

MY Welcome Post

My name is Javier. I go to Elm Park School. I have a blog because I can show people my learning. My interests are playing on my ps3 and pc games. I'm looking forward to seeing any comments you have.

Predator- free dream or reality?

Rakira - now and then

Four senses - School Journal

Oops! Reading evidence

My Reflection

In this piece of work I was learning to link ideas (both implicit and explicit) in the text to give a greater understanding of the story.
I found this piece of work tricky because I didn't know what to put in for one of the words.
My next step is to i need to improve my work more better.